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Reaching out to far
Hoping to reach you where ever you are
Knowing you may not be reaching back
Brings my heart under bitter attack
Lying in your arms where I thought I belonged
Wondering what the truths is before I am wronged
I think to myself who to am I deceiving
Who will this feeling be revealing
I know sometimes I like to be useful like a tool
But how can I stop myself from becoming a fool...
:iconkitsuneredwolf:

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inspired by my bleach story and Mama Mia.

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:iconanimangagurl:
Awesome I really felt it very good poem!!!

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.:*My biggest dream is to be a anime artist creator and manga artist too!I hope God guide me to the right goal of my life*:.

You can help me by putting comments!!!:D
:iconkitsuneredwolf:
thank you ^^

--
Razors pain you; Rivers are damp;
Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp.
Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give;
Gas smells awful; You might as well live.
-- Dorothy Parker
:icondevars:
Very lovely!
Unreturned love is such a cruel thing.

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"I hear and I forget. I see and I remember. I do and I understand."

Lead me not into temptation -
I already know the way.
:iconkitsuneredwolf:
thank you

--
Razors pain you; Rivers are damp;
Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp.
Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give;
Gas smells awful; You might as well live.
-- Dorothy Parker
:icondevars:
You're welcome!

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"I hear and I forget. I see and I remember. I do and I understand."

Lead me not into temptation -
I already know the way.
:iconvelvetmaiden:
Mm.. indeed. How can we live or love without being the fool. The concept itself is hard to grasp, but you have captured it perfectly. Wonderful poem.

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~VelvetMaiden~
:iconkitsuneredwolf:
thank you ^^

--
Razors pain you; Rivers are damp;
Acids stain you; And drugs cause cramp.
Guns aren't lawful; Nooses give;
Gas smells awful; You might as well live.
-- Dorothy Parker

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